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Far Down Below by ~adog262:iconadog262:





Far down below
there lies a princess,
sleeping deeply,
dreaming of the first kiss.

Snow White, the princess,
has fallen under the spell
of the poison apple,
which has put her to
a death-like sleep.

She sleeps deeply,
dreaming of a kiss
from her love, Prince Charming.
The spell will be broken
when the prince comes to
her and wets her lips; but
until then, she sleeps
like a dead corpse.

The seven dwarfs that
found her don’t know
of the spell she’s in,
so they think she’s dead.
One of them suggested to
bury her, but another one
argued that she’s too beautiful
to bury under the ground.
The leader of the seven, Happy,
suddenly came up with an idea.
They will put her dead corpse in
a coffin made of glass and gold,
so they won’t have to bury her.
Her corpse will keep fresh
and they can still visit her.

Now, far down below the woods,
far down below the trees,
below the birds nests,
her body now lies in the
coffin of glass and gold.

The seven dwarfs are right
beside her, with flowers
to give her, and tears
in their eyes.  She has been
with them for years,
and now she is gone,
or at least that’s what they think.
The animals(deer, birds, chipmunks, etc.)
Shed tears with the dwarfs.
They’ve never known a better
woman than Princess Snow White.

Suddenly, Prince Charming
comes riding into the woods
on his horse of white.
He sees the princess,
gets of the horse,
and walks toward her.
The dwarfs sees the man
and suddenly has the backs
chilling, afraid he’s gonna
kill her. They sit still as the
man walks toward the coffin,
breathless and motionless.

The prince is now beside
the young and beautiful princess.
With his lips, he kisses the
princess’s lips, and then puts
his head and arms on the gold ridges.
The dwarfs now know the man means
no trouble, so they and the animals
too bow their heads.

Snow White, awakened from
her dream, opens her eyes
and sits up in silence.
The animals raise their heads first,
and look at her with delight in their eyes.
The dwarfs then raise their heads,
suddenly have excitement in their faces.
The princess stares at the animals,
stares at the dwarfs, and then
finally stares at the bowed head
of Prince Charming.
The prince slowly raises his head,
sees the awakened princess,
and hugs her tightly.
The dwarfs and animals run
around and jump with joy, happy
that she wasn’t dead after all.

The dwarfs wave goodbye
as the prince carries Snow White
to his horse.  When both of them
are sitting on the horse, they
turn their heads toward the dwarfs and animals
and wave with their hands their goodbyes.
Off the horse goes, towards the kingdom,
where they will live happily ever after,
which was what Snow White was dreaming of.

After the old-looking witch(her strict
step-mother in disguise) gave her the poison
apple and told her to make a wish before
taking a bite, she also said that the wish
she makes will make her dreams come true
after just taking one bite.  Was there some
other ingredient in the apple that
made her proposals true?
Nobody knows,
until a poison apple comes to you.
Could this mean that bad things that
happen could turn into something good?

The End
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Author's Comments

This story isn't new. It is the type of story where one writes an old story differently. Interesting, huh?


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